Pretty good! I like that you showed the pictures with Mr. Biscuit as a dog, and let the viewer use their fantasy. The pacing could use some work. Mainly the first part is a bit too slow with not much interesting stuff happening.

That was really good! My only complaint is the laughing inbetween. Sometimes it works to leave that in, when something is done really shitty and you want to convey to your audience how you yourself find it silly as well. But in this case the quality is so good that the laughing feels out of place.

This is great haha! Lacks in art and audio quality (though it has its charm), but the script and pacing is done really well!

This is a really good and addicting game. It reminds me a bit of the arcade game Emeraldia. At the start I went kind of chaotic, but after a while I knew what to do. I got a highscore of 316620.

It's a cool concept but a bit too slow. With a game like this where the player has to retry a lot you want them to get back to speed as quickly as possible. But in this game it takes a while to kill a monster. So if I died in level 6 it's gonna take me a while before I get back to level 6, giving me only 5 upgrades. Instead of making the player mana-hungry at the start, I'd suggest finding a way to make that problem appear as you progress. Perhaps the damage you deal is equal to mana-consumption?

It takes way too long for it to get interesting (the sliding being introduced), and even then it's not much of a challenge.

Really cool! I just wanted to let you know I absolutely loved that surprise drop @ 0:23, worked really well!

This song is beautiful. Where is the internet, not listening to your beautiful song?

Really, beautiful.

This is one of those posts that heavily inspire me to pick up art again