Pretty good! I like that you showed the pictures with Mr. Biscuit as a dog, and let the viewer use their fantasy. The pacing could use some work. Mainly the first part is a bit too slow with not much interesting stuff happening.
Pretty good! I like that you showed the pictures with Mr. Biscuit as a dog, and let the viewer use their fantasy. The pacing could use some work. Mainly the first part is a bit too slow with not much interesting stuff happening.
That was really good! My only complaint is the laughing inbetween. Sometimes it works to leave that in, when something is done really shitty and you want to convey to your audience how you yourself find it silly as well. But in this case the quality is so good that the laughing feels out of place.
This is great haha! Lacks in art and audio quality (though it has its charm), but the script and pacing is done really well!
Often these kind of weird looking animations make me chuckle at most, but for some reason this made me really laugh. Arnold's face and the way he walks looks so dumb it's great.
Cute!
This is really cute and well animated. Though I feel like some parts could be smoother. The camera pan and zoom at 0:27 could've been combined, and made smoother as well with some tweening. And perhaps zoom out a bit overall.
Weird, awesome, funny. As expected!
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